i saw u smile,
left me thinking,
is it why i love u,
for u haven't felt it.
i loved the feeling,
for it was new,
like the first time,
when i was nine.
i wasn't the reason,
with a hope in my heart,
i knew i will be,
for that smile some day.
some day when it will rain,
some day with no pain,
some day when i would wake up,
seeing you open your eyes next to me.
There are questions unanswered,
breaths unfelt,
there are moments i'll miss u,
and then those when i'll want u.
i might not wait for the smile,
coz it has taken quite a while,
i will not love another,
for i am your admirer.
i have waited enough,
i have ran enough,
but now i am gonna smile,
even run for u over a mile.
i love the stars, and the sky,
for they would never make me cry,
still I love being in love,
for its you who i love.
is it why i love u,
for u haven't felt it.
i loved the feeling,
for it was new,
like the first time,
when i was nine.
i wasn't the reason,
with a hope in my heart,
i knew i will be,
for that smile some day.
some day when it will rain,
some day with no pain,
some day when i would wake up,
seeing you open your eyes next to me.
There are questions unanswered,
breaths unfelt,
there are moments i'll miss u,
and then those when i'll want u.
i might not wait for the smile,
coz it has taken quite a while,
i will not love another,
for i am your admirer.
i have waited enough,
i have ran enough,
but now i am gonna smile,
even run for u over a mile.
i love the stars, and the sky,
for they would never make me cry,
still I love being in love,
for its you who i love.
dude i knw its good.. but there is something in it that makes me wonder is it only the rhyming that i liked or also the meaning.. because it mourns a lot but always in good hope of meeting again...hw it can be.. in that case the narration should be of hopeful or is it ?? i mean i am very confused on the theme..but watever the words choosen were simple and yet descriptive.. good going keep it up !!
ReplyDeleteLove all around. Simple and meaningful. What else we want form poetry? Loved it:)
ReplyDelete@jimmy - that's my exact point of expressing, i am mourning right now for some one but with a hope of meeting again.. So its like a mixed state in which these words came out. If you know there is something called a hope against a hope, if i am pretty sure i know she might never return but i still have a hope against it.. :)
ReplyDelete@Saru - thanks :)
lovely...beautiful to the core:)
ReplyDeleteI sense that it was written with some one in mind, Mr. Banker, true? Never mind, you don't have to answer that:)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, it is.
'I love being in love,
for its you who i love.'
Perfect lines.
Let the lover be disgraceful, absent minded and crazy. Something sober will worry about things going badly. Let the lover be.
ReplyDelete-Choudhary